關於 英文作文批改
- 頂大學長姐修改評語
- 客製化文章優化建議
- 文章邏輯、寫作架構建議
- 即時批改、三個工作天內完成
- 字彙、語法句構、文法修正建議
如果你⋯⋯
- 不知道自己和高分作文的差別
- 想要優化我的文章又不知道怎麼做
- 學校老師只幫我缺出文法錯誤、錯字
- 可是我不知道怎麼寫才是正確的
- 連接兩句話時我只會用when和and
- 除了gain能表達獲得，還有什麼同義字
批改範例
原句：“When it comes to the park,the first association people will think that it is place used to release our daily life.”
更正：When it comes to the park,the first thing people will think is that it is a place that it is place used to escape from our daily lives.
解釋：修正了“association”到“thing”以使鉅子結構更清晰，並將“release”更改為“escape from”以提高表達準確率
優化建議
6.適時使用比喻和隱喻：使用比喻和隱喻可以增強文章的意境和感染力，例如：
原：Jill’s words have come true.
修正：Jill’s words have blossomed into reality like a long-awaited spring.
好評回饋
批改範例
原句：“When it comes to the park,the first association people will think that it is place used to release our daily life.”
更正：When it comes to the park,the first thing people will think is that it is a place that it is place used to escape from our daily lives.
解釋：修正了“association”到“thing”以使鉅子結構更清晰，並將“release”更改為“escape from”以提高表達準確率
優化建議
6.適時使用比喻和隱喻：使用比喻和隱喻可以增強文章的意境和感染力，例如：
原：Jill’s words have come true.
修正：Jill’s words have blossomed into reality like a long-awaited spring.
好評回饋
